notes from crit one

it was pretty informal, which i like. we just gathered around in a little circle in groups of about 4 people with two of the tutor and talked about what we were planning. no one in my group showed any work except me, i just let the tutors have a peek at some of my early sketches from my previous post and told them my plans. anyway, the basic feedback from the crit was to not only make an environment that would be iconic to fans of the game but to make one that is satirist of online play. i'm not sure if this is loosing the focus of my project by expanding the audience too much, you cant please everyone and if it drifts too far from what it was it wont even be for the fans anymore so what i reckon is to have the satire but only of aspects of monster hunter and its team of 4. so thats a point to think on.