page 8 brings a heroic reveal for super hero sky. i'm not sure if the story so far reads a bit sporadic or makes sense, i feel like i'm a bit close to the project to tell because if there are gaps and such i'm sure i'll just fill in the blanks without thinking when i look at it. so anyone reading this should let me know, i'm sure that that getting the story into 10 pages and making it understandable is difficult. i need a bit of help. tried to get a diminished perspective in to make her look more grandiose.
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