Tuesday, 2 June 2009

new page 8




little changes to the text bubble,getting a bit more of that glam into it.

new page 7




small changes for this page, people felt that a bit of gore would help to communicate what was happening 'off frame'

new page 6




trying to keep the action more cohesive by adding an extra panel and motion lines, keeping the monster in all the action sots. also putting in the other team members more because i was focussing too much on just djinn previously.

new page 5




changed to add a background and more of a fore ground, people before were saying that it looked a little like the kutku (monster) was just laying down. its generally agreed that its fixed now which is cool. also i added the '!?' in red as another reference to the game that a fan pointed out to me i was previously missing.

new page 4




changed the image of boneskill arriving on the kitty kart, i guess this is a page that only fans of the game will 'get' because it totally relies on the reference to that kart. also if you look real close i cat stamped boneskills bum. x

new page 3




full swap around so now instead of having an establishing shot theres the scene where djinn turns around and goes "guys?" then you can see that they arent around where he's looking.

new page 2




so its only a few little changes to this page but like, boneskill was holding a pen before..... whats that all about luke? i'm such an idiot sometimes.