new page 5

changed to add a background and more of a fore ground, people before were saying that it looked a little like the kutku (monster) was just laying down. its generally agreed that its fixed now which is cool. also i added the '!?' in red as another reference to the game that a fan pointed out to me i was previously missing.

new page 4

changed the image of boneskill arriving on the kitty kart, i guess this is a page that only fans of the game will 'get' because it totally relies on the reference to that kart. also if you look real close i cat stamped boneskills bum. x

new page 3

full swap around so now instead of having an establishing shot theres the scene where djinn turns around and goes "guys?" then you can see that they arent around where he's looking.

new page 2

so its only a few little changes to this page but like, boneskill was holding a pen before..... whats that all about luke? i'm such an idiot sometimes.

new page 1

so i'm posting up the new pages from the comic along with the old ones for comparison but basically all i've done is work on the notes and amendments i got from the final crit.

colour amendments

so i thought i'd just put up the colour pieces so you guys can see the process again. it was kind of cool putting the shadows and highlights in because i had to check the lighting and stuff in my existing pages. hopefully i got it right. x

more amendments

more images for making the changes to my comic pages. for that guild building image in the previous post i used a reference from the game (obviously) but i also stole a bit of inspiration from rob kirks second life build based on terry pratchet's books.